How you should organize your journal:
PROFESSOR HERBERT:
Professor Herbert wore a gray suit of clothes. The suit matched his gray hair.
DAVE: Dave is the only child out of eleven to get into high school he wears nice clothes only when hes at school this is because he comes from a poor family.
PA (LUSTER) SEXTON:
Pa’s eyes danced fire. His face was getting red. The red color was coming through the brown, weather-beaten skin on Pa’s face.
MA SEXTON: She is about the same age as pa and some what understands where pa is coming from but believes tha pa shouldn’t go to the school with his gun but fails in her attempt to talk him out of it.
FARM: The Sexton farm has nineteen cattle, twenty-five hogs and four mules.
SCHOOL: it is a high school, which Dave attends after walking six miles to and back from.
PROFESSOR HERBERT:
Professor Herbert wore a gray suit of clothes. The suit matched his gray hair.
DAVE: Dave is the only child out of eleven to get into high school he wears nice clothes only when hes at school this is because he comes from a poor family.
PA (LUSTER) SEXTON:
Pa’s eyes danced fire. His face was getting red. The red color was coming through the brown, weather-beaten skin on Pa’s face.
MA SEXTON: She is about the same age as pa and some what understands where pa is coming from but believes tha pa shouldn’t go to the school with his gun but fails in her attempt to talk him out of it.
FARM: The Sexton farm has nineteen cattle, twenty-five hogs and four mules.
SCHOOL: it is a high school, which Dave attends after walking six miles to and back from.
Metaphor: “His eyes danced fire.”
Simile: “shaking like a leaf in the wind.”
Dialect: They spoke in a southern accent
Simile: “shaking like a leaf in the wind.”
Dialect: They spoke in a southern accent
“Course o’ study,” says pa, “what study, bug study?